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Is there anywhere on the internet that i can post a POEM i wrote and get some feedback on it?

  • Posted on April 3, 2011 at 1:21 pm

All answers are appreciated…if you would be willing to read it and tell me what you think..leave a comment and i will post it so you can read it…it is a poem about how a fathers drug addiction affected his daughter…i believe it is a very good poem, it hits home…so please, leave a website or let me know if your willing to read it over

THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

http://thisishowfarwevecome.deviantart.com/art/He-chose-drugs-over-me-156331374

this is one of my poems…i will be adding more like it soon

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So far, be as honest as you possible can, what do you think of my character? Thank You for Your Feedback?

  • Posted on November 15, 2010 at 7:24 am

She’s a 14 year female.
Her mother named her Naomi, because she liked the name. Ana is her middle and grandmother’s first name. her father insisted he name his first daughter after his mother, the middle name was a compromise.
If you like her, she will like you and the same if she do not like her.
She usually keeps her personal beliefs private and avoids problems and conflicts.
Currently her main priorities is earning high grades, then socializing her peers.
She has a few close friends which are female also, but majority of her friends/acquaintances are male. She thinks most girls her age are superficial and competitive and overall annoying.
She shares plenty of interests with boys her age – video games, competitive sports, pulling pranks
She is the peacemaker within her friends but when intoxicated or influenced by illegal drugs or alcohol, her entire demeanor changes drastically.
She judges people according to the circumstance or situation versus judging their character entirely.
She prefers working together on things and tries to do things that will benefit the group altogether than solely herself.
She sometimes has a distorted self-image of imperfections – particularly her height, she’s 5 ft 1 and her lack of breasts (32A cup).
She feels very vulnerable talking about her feelings, usually avoids this, tries to relieve emotions through sports, music. if she does feel it is neccessary to speak of her feelings, she will open up to her one of close girlfriends, her cousin or older female aunt.
She always tries to be honest and polite, when giving advice and avoids lectruing or passing judgment on you.
She has a tendency to ask personal questions when she initially meets you, that is if she is interested in you.
hmm…I do not see how she is annoying.

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