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Is there anywhere on the internet that i can post a POEM i wrote and get some feedback on it?

  • Posted on April 3, 2011 at 1:21 pm

All answers are appreciated…if you would be willing to read it and tell me what you think..leave a comment and i will post it so you can read it…it is a poem about how a fathers drug addiction affected his daughter…i believe it is a very good poem, it hits home…so please, leave a website or let me know if your willing to read it over

THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

http://thisishowfarwevecome.deviantart.com/art/He-chose-drugs-over-me-156331374

this is one of my poems…i will be adding more like it soon

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re post i need more answers please?

  • Posted on September 5, 2010 at 1:23 pm

ok so me and my boyfriend have a 15 month old together and i’m pregnant with number 2. i got on with his half sister fine until i had my daughter since then she has done everything she can to take over, disrespect my rules and push me out. We have spoken to her about it a few times and every time she disappears for a while when she comes back she’s fine again then after a month or so she starts up again but she does it more discreetly so nobody notices. their mother killed herself a few years ago and my b/f says since then she’s been able to do what she likes and nobody will say anything apparently. it seams to me that she’s trying to break our family up but i can’t understand why she would do that cos the only person she is going to hurt is her brother. i am trying to do the best for my daughter and she just wants to ruin it for example we have allot of friends that take drugs and i have managed to keep it away from the house and my daughter as i don’t want her growing up like that. when we have a night off and we go out she tries to get my boyfriend to take ecstasy or coke (he used to take it but hasn’t in years) knowing i won’t be happy if he does it and it will cause arguments. she also came to our house waving bags of coke around in front of my daughter. i’ve told my b/f i’ve had enough of it and i want nothing more to do with her. he says he will speak to her about it but no matter what he does i will make sure she will not come back into mine or my daughters life until she shows me she’s grown up. i just cant understand why she’s doing this. if we do split up over my b/f taking drugs i will make sure i get full custody and he has nothing to do with my children so the only person she’s going to hurt is her brother. why would someone do this? why would she act like this? i can’t understand it at all

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